Really cool
Really nice work, I love the skin tones and texture, and the whole face is really proportional and well done. The only thing that bugs me a little is the hair in front of the eye - you've got a couple really thick brush strokes there underneath the nice wispy hair ones, it kinda flattens that area out a little. Just a nitpick, though, on the whole I really like this a lot, and I love the white eye. It keeps this from being just another portrait of a pretty girl.